extra "

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diff --git a/Master/LICENSE.TL b/Master/LICENSE.TL
index 0a842b9c854..ff26f4edf29 100644
--- a/Master/LICENSE.TL
+++ b/Master/LICENSE.TL
@@ -43,9 +43,9 @@ not us, in case of questions or problems.  A new top-level
 README.<yourwork> file is a good place to describe the general situation.
 
 - Especially (but not necessarily) if changes or additions are made, we
-recommend a clearly different title, such as "<your work> DVD", based on
+recommend a clearly different title, such as "<your work> DVD, based on
 TeX Live YYYY (with updates)", where YYYY is the year of TeX Live you
-are publishing.  This credits both our work and yours.
+are using.  This credits both our work and yours.
 
 - You absolutely may *not* place your own copyright on the entire
 distribution, since it is not your work (as stated above, TeX Live is
@@ -64,15 +64,16 @@ a) Acknowledging that TeX Live is developed as a joint effort by all TeX
    of choice.  The web page http://www.tug.org/usergroups.html may be
    referenced as a list of TeX user groups.
 
-b) Referencing the TeX Live home page: http://www.tug.org/tex-live/.
+b) Referencing the TeX Live home page: http://www.tug.org/texlive/
 
 Such information may be placed on the label of your media, your cover,
 and/or in accompanying text (for instance, in the acknowledgements
 section of a book).
 
-Finally, although it is certainly not a requirement, we'd like to invite
-any redistributors to make a donation to the project, whether cash or
-in-kind, for example via https://www.tug.org/donate/dev.html.  Thanks.
+Finally, although it is again not at all a requirement, we'd like to
+invite any redistributors to make a donation to the project, whether
+cash or in-kind, for example via https://www.tug.org/donate/dev.html.
+Thanks.
 
 
 If you have any questions or comments, *please* contact us.  In general,
@@ -93,8 +94,8 @@ Finally, we are often asked what license to use for new work.  To be
 considered for inclusion on TeX Live, a package must use a free software
 license, such as the LaTeX Project Public License, the GNU General
 Public License, the X Window System license, the modified BSD license,
-etc.  Furthermore, all sources must be available (including for
-documentation files).  Please see the url's below for more discussion of this.
+etc.  Furthermore, all sources must be available, including for
+documentation files.  Please see the url's below for more information.
 
 Thanks for your interest in TeX.