fix LPPL references and other 2008 updates (cfrees

5 Oct 2008 00:08:44).


git-svn-id: svn://tug.org/texlive/trunk@10865 c570f23f-e606-0410-a88d-b1316a301751

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/Master/LICENSE.TL b/Master/LICENSE.TL
index ff26f4edf29..ed3448f6cbe 100644
--- a/Master/LICENSE.TL
+++ b/Master/LICENSE.TL
@@ -17,16 +17,14 @@ requirements placed thereon by the owners of the respective packages.
 
 To most easily learn these requirements, we suggest checking the TeX
 Catalogue at: http://www.ctan.org/tex-archive/help/Catalogue/ (or any
-CTAN mirror).  The Catalogue is also included in TeX Live in
-./texmf/doc/html/catalogue/, but the online version will have updates.
-Of course the legal statements within the packages themselves are the
-final authority.
+CTAN mirror).  Of course the legal statements within the packages
+themselves are the final authority.
 
 In some cases, TeX Live is distributed with a snapshot of the CTAN
 archive, which is entirely independent of and separable from TeX Live
-itself.  (The "live" DVD in the TeX Collection is one example of this.)
-Please be aware that the CTAN snapshot contains many files which are
-*not* freely redistributable; see LICENSE.CTAN for more information.
+itself.  (The TeX Collection DVD is one example of this.)  Please be
+aware that the CTAN snapshot contains many files which are *not* freely
+redistributable; see LICENSE.CTAN for more information.
 
 
 GUIDELINES FOR REDISTRIBUTION:
@@ -44,8 +42,8 @@ README.<yourwork> file is a good place to describe the general situation.
 
 - Especially (but not necessarily) if changes or additions are made, we
 recommend a clearly different title, such as "<your work> DVD, based on
-TeX Live YYYY (with updates)", where YYYY is the year of TeX Live you
-are using.  This credits both our work and yours.
+TeX Live YYYY", where YYYY is the year of TeX Live you are using.  This
+credits both our work and yours.
 
 - You absolutely may *not* place your own copyright on the entire
 distribution, since it is not your work (as stated above, TeX Live is
@@ -61,8 +59,7 @@ packaging and marketing details are not covered by any TeX Live license.
 
 a) Acknowledging that TeX Live is developed as a joint effort by all TeX
    user groups, and encouraging the user/reader to join their user group
-   of choice.  The web page http://www.tug.org/usergroups.html may be
-   referenced as a list of TeX user groups.
+   of choice, as listed on the web page http://www.tug.org/usergroups.html.
 
 b) Referencing the TeX Live home page: http://www.tug.org/texlive/
 
@@ -133,5 +130,5 @@ Debian Free Software Guidelines:    http://www.debian.org/intro/free
 FSF commentary on existing licenses:
   http://www.gnu.org/licenses/license-list.html
 
-LPPL: http://latex-project.org/lppl.html or texmf/doc/latex/base/lppl.txt
-LPPL rationale: texmf/doc/latex/base/modguide.pdf
+LPPL: http://latex-project.org/lppl.html or texmf-dist/doc/latex/base/lppl.txt
+LPPL rationale: texmf-dist/doc/latex/base/modguide.pdf