Notes sur la VF --------------- 1976: trop d'espace avant le alltt, ou pas assez après. À régler dans le préambule ? Suggestions pour texlive-en.tex ------------------------------- win32 supported: add Seven 3.1: be clearer about admin install (in general) Ajout df, fin de 1.1 : Les utilisateurs des éditions précédentes de \TL{} sont invités à lire, \emph{avant toute mise à jour}, la section~\ref{sec:tlcurrent} page~\pageref{sec:tlcurrent} qui présente les principaux changements intervenus cette année. 233: the translated README's are no more at the top-level, but in readme-*.dir as described above. 244: maybe mention that the TeX Live documentation is what the reader is currently reading? 271: addition by df: nothing should be manually added, modified of removed from this tree. (mpg: actually, this is a common mistake) 326: addition by df: eg, \dirname{texmf/tex/latex} for you personnal LaTeX macros files. 369: xetex/ (trailing slash) 678: the numbering is weird (a, c, e, f, ...) and 804: additional precisions here may be useful, like: "The default paper size selection for tools such as \prog{dvips}, \prog{pdftex}, \prog{xdvi}. It does not influence, and may be overridden by, the default paper size used by macros such as the LaTeX classes and packages. Of course, individual document..." 816: is it clear for everyone that the context here is \write18? "execution of external programs" does not seem explicit enough to me. 1042: s/filename/pkgname/ 1053: Isn't conf.d Debian-specific? 1142: "this" looks like it means "using XeTeX", but probably refers to "installing fonts". 1236: the first sentence is about system fonts, while the end of the paragraph says \TL fonts. Which one is correct? 1267: quite messy, sometimes the description says "is free software", sometimes not. We'd better say "all are free software unless stated otherwise". We could say which items are Windows-only. Why is there 2 Emacs items? Concerning Vim, add a reference to latex-suite. Why not put TW first, then other free cross-platform software, then free platform-specific, then non-free? Add Kile for Linux? 1296: the term "installation" may be confusing (I thought it was about the net installer first), maybe "using TL from a network" would be better? 1340: addition by df: nothing is touched on the host system outside ~/.tlportable2009 1389: s/location/repository/ 1506: IMO, TeXworks should come first, and Perl/GS last (I doubt the average user cares about it). 1544: s/Xe\TeX/\XeTeX/ (in other places, too) 1562: this section sounds rather theoretical: how does all this relate to TL? 3076: Final note on the past is \section{Present}??? Suggestions pour texlive-en.sty ------------------------------- - TeXworks logo, XeTeX logo? - More systematic use of \xspace?